>Song Review and Critique : "Imagine This" Ratisha -@Ratishanyc


 Song Review

Artist: Ratisha
title: Imagine This
Hook- decent, nothing spectacular, the first portion of it is catchy the rest of it is hard to hear

Beat- the beat doesn’t sound properly mixed, didn’t care for it. 

Originality- 7/10

Lyrics : nothing quite quotable

Melody: Melody doesn’t seem to fit the song

Production/Recording quality- This song has potential, the vocals need a little more correction, the beat makes the vocals sound like mud in some portions.  That mix is what’s hurting the song.

Does the song engage the listener and/or have emotional
Not to me, the beat is a little too hard on my ears to connect

 Does the melody suit the song and contribute towards its

Not really

Is the song memorable?    
The first part of the hook maybe

I Think it just needs a little more work and a proper mixed CLEAN sounding version.Work on the harmonies, I think the beat hurt the song the most. Keep working Keep grinding.
— Phoenixstar9

>MIXTAPE – Yung Miss (@yungmiss) : Master Chef (The Beat Tape)


Yung Miss –
album name

Master Chef (The Beat Tape)


I am a Yung Miss fan! If you don’t know her

get on it, she’s a producer & songwriter.

>Song Review and Critique : "4th and 1" Ill Thoughts -@Thoughtful1904


 Song Review and Critique :  “4th and 1” Ill Thoughts -@Thoughtful1904 by “Anonymous”
Artist Name: Ill Thoughts
Contact: Donovan Smith
Cell: 619 655 7345
Creativity – It was creative in its own right. It takes a lot for an artist to express themselves through music.
Hook – I didn’t necessarily catch the hook. It wasn’t like the standard. Intro / Verse / Hook / Verse format, if there was a hook? I didn’t catch it.
Beat-   Being a true fan of a “beat” , I’m really feeling the beat. I enjoyed some of the subtle elements of it. I would download the instrumentals…
Originality – The piece is very original. I can’t think of any other artist that I know that has put a track together like that.
Lyrics: I had to listen the lyrics again. There is a message there; however I don’t feel like it made sense. I would have to read the lyrics.
Melody: the melody works for me
Flow – There are elements through the piece where I feel like it didn’t flow well. It was like the rhyme fell off of the beat. It flows like a poem being read over some instrumentals. There are parts in it that I feel like he’s trying to catch – up with the beat, and stumbles.
Production/Recording quality – The quality was good. A good sound.
Does the song engage the listener and/or have emotional
impact?  I did not feel engaged. The message isn’t clear enough for me to feel emotionally impacted.
Is the song memorable?    Honestly, not really.
Overall : I felt like the artist is a poet and his intentions are good. However, I think he would want to work on flowing with the beat and making the message clear. Some words rhyme, very good. But, if the stanzas aren’t relevant then, it doesn’t make sense. 

– Anonymous  

>Song Review and Critique : ( @cashcountygoat )Tha G.o.a.t " prod. Mdubbbaybee "One Nite (Review by Phoenixstar9)


Song Review and Critique : ( @cashcountygoat )Tha G.o.a.t ”  prod. Mdubbbaybee “One Nite (Review by Phoenixstar9)


Creativity –  Didn’t really step out the box here.

Pretty decent, a little catchy

Beat-  Beat a little simple, definitely had me bobbin my head

Originality- Pimp shit, didn’t put me in the mind of anyone else def got points for that

Lyrics : Nothing too special, no standout lines here, just braggadacio

Flow- Flow is pretty dope, just some laid back og type shit here, big impact with little effort

Production/Recording quality- No complaints except on the hook, the slowed down  portion is a little inaudible

Does the song engage the listener and/or have emotional

A little makes you want to go out and pull a random chick , ideal song for the club

Is the song memorable?    
Not a smash hit but has potential

I like this track, can’t say I would be playing it a month from now but definitely an on point track 

– Phoenixstar9

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